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Literature Text
The room hides more than it does in the morning
As shadows run across the wall
Dolls in the corner, mouths agape
As a figure outside grows increasingly tall
The rustling of leaves can be heard
Outside your quiet home
A single tree stands in the distance
In the open, all alone
Branches scrape across the window
As the room becomes ever more dark
The tree, now in full sight
The moonlight reflecting off its bark
Finally the room plunges into darkness
The fear has no reason to hide
A single thought now comes to mind
No trees grow outside.
As shadows run across the wall
Dolls in the corner, mouths agape
As a figure outside grows increasingly tall
The rustling of leaves can be heard
Outside your quiet home
A single tree stands in the distance
In the open, all alone
Branches scrape across the window
As the room becomes ever more dark
The tree, now in full sight
The moonlight reflecting off its bark
Finally the room plunges into darkness
The fear has no reason to hide
A single thought now comes to mind
No trees grow outside.
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This sort of talks about how the darkness distorts our perception and how things aren't always what they seem to be.
© 2004 - 2024 Karimi
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Vivid imagery, and nicely formed stanzas. The imperfect rhyme 'home' and 'alone' (in addition to being the name of a damn poor movie ) stand out a little as being weak amongst the other perfect rhymes. Consider substitution? Other than that, it's all good.